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Friday, March 30, 2012

CM1145 #14 Research Papers

Finally, the last post.

I'm going to tell you a little about my research paper. I'm writing it in a fictional short story format, and I'm hopeing that through my research I can create a very realistic theme. When I read over my own work though, I always feel as though I made it to fictional, like you're watching a cartoon or something of the sort. It never gets the true feelings I'd hoped to give it. I haven't started writing my paper yet, but this is going to be the first story I ever write using research. Hopefully that helps me with the realism I'm hopeing to accomplish.

So far I've begun the main characters and setting descriptions. I feel like the entire story will take place on a slave trade ship, starting in Africa when the slaves are originally being stolen away from their home. The main character is Thomas. He is African and one of the 130 people boarded onto the boat (I don't have a name for the boat yet, anyone willing to help me out?). His friend Harriot is also an African forced into the tiny space below deck. The main caretaker and janitor on board of the ship is Wallace. He's part of the crew and is mostly in charge of watching the slaves, distributing water and food, and emptying the tiny buckets the slaves are offered as toilets. (They are lucky, on most ships they got neither care taker, nor toilet..)

Anyway, although I haven't given away any real detail, I'll leave it at that before I do give away my entire story plot. Anyone want to offer me some ideas on how the story should play out, or other characters I should add, an event such as a heavy storm or shark attack?? I'm still building the story plot so anything you offer me is greatly appreciated!

CM1145 #13

So these last few blogs are definately rush job. I can't believe I didn't realize yesterday was the 29th? Time really caught up on me!

Right now we are in English, and although I should be working on my current essay, I'm going to finish my last two blogs, because they take about ten minutes each, and I'd rather get them done now then be rushing to do them tonight before work.

The topic of this blog post, is my previous blog posts. Starting off this semester I was really excited, I could create stories on anything related to the course and publish it as a blog! I wrote emotional appeals, and used the near far method to describe a rock. As time went by, there were less things that were easily written without research. I couldn't write a post on a causal argument, or a Literary Critisism. This dissapointed me. Every time I opened blogger.com and started writing a post I felt a pain in my chest when i realized how journaly my blog was getting. Such as this post. My thoughts. You probably care less about my thoughts. I'd rather write a story for you to read, get your mind off all the other blogs about peoples thoughts. How many times can you read "I really enjoyed learning about arguments today! This is what I learned:..." before you feel like pulling your hair out.

Well, there's a little rant of mine.